Comments on: 22 roundabouts http://elhambahrain.net/2008/10/31/22-roundabouts/ Bahrain's Creative Arts Group Sun, 09 Aug 2009 14:20:26 -0400 http://wordpress.org/?v=2.8.6 hourly 1 By: alvin http://elhambahrain.net/2008/10/31/22-roundabouts/comment-page-1/#comment-65 alvin Wed, 20 May 2009 07:23:43 +0000 http://elhambahrain.net/?p=197#comment-65 Carla, What's up??Hope you're always fine wherever you are right now....(Bahrain I guess).Just taking a little of my time to say my thoughts about you.When was the last time I saw you?I don't even know how many years i can count in my fingers have passed the last time I saw you.But, it just crossed my thoughts how are you and where are you all these years. Kas nasa-ok, adu iti tawen a naglabas iti biag tayo.Nu idi ubbing tayo pay, itatta adda iti naduma duma nga paset iti biag tayon.Dagiti naglabas a tawen iti arimpadek iti biag a manglim limo kadatayo, isu iti nangted sirib ken adal kadatayo. Ammok, haan ta man nga nasinged nga ag-gayyem, ngem dakkel iti paset iti biag ko nga na-amamo ka.Dagiti ladingit ken ragsak a nagpasaran tayo idi agad-adal tayo kanayon to latta a lagip ditoy panunot ko. Agyamanak kenka iti aniaman nga oras ken kapanunotam kaniak.Naragsakak ta na-imatangak ken nabasak iti maysa a nakaay-ayu nga poem nga inka insurat ditoy.Sika latta ni Carla a nasirib ken creative and most of all the woman with soulful and artistic mind I have come to know. Till here.Hope you'll read it.Take care and God bless you all the time.till we meet again. iti gayyem tungpal biag, alvin crisostomo Carla,

What’s up??Hope you’re always fine wherever you are right now….(Bahrain I guess).Just taking a little of my time to say my thoughts about you.When was the last time I saw you?I don’t even know how many years i can count in my fingers have passed the last time I saw you.But, it just crossed my thoughts how are you and where are you all these years.

Kas nasa-ok, adu iti tawen a naglabas iti biag tayo.Nu idi ubbing tayo pay, itatta adda iti naduma duma nga paset iti biag tayon.Dagiti naglabas a tawen iti arimpadek iti biag a manglim limo kadatayo, isu iti nangted sirib ken adal kadatayo.

Ammok, haan ta man nga nasinged nga ag-gayyem, ngem dakkel iti paset iti biag ko nga na-amamo ka.Dagiti ladingit ken ragsak a nagpasaran tayo idi agad-adal tayo kanayon to latta a lagip ditoy panunot ko.

Agyamanak kenka iti aniaman nga oras ken kapanunotam kaniak.Naragsakak ta na-imatangak ken nabasak iti maysa a nakaay-ayu nga poem nga inka insurat ditoy.Sika latta ni Carla a nasirib ken creative and most of all the woman with soulful and artistic mind I have come to know.

Till here.Hope you’ll read it.Take care and God bless you all the time.till we meet again.

iti gayyem tungpal biag,
alvin crisostomo

]]> By: Daniel http://elhambahrain.net/2008/10/31/22-roundabouts/comment-page-1/#comment-51 Daniel Sun, 22 Feb 2009 11:55:34 +0000 http://elhambahrain.net/?p=197#comment-51 Hi Ms. Carmela, (I'm presuming you're thomasian, I graduated from UST, Faculty of Arts and Letters ):D I've read your profile. I stumbled upon this site by chance or not.. I've heard about elham for some time now and I was wondering if they cultivate an avenue for poetry and seeing your name and poetry with elham answered my query. I've been writing poetry since I was kid, mostly angst poetry, I've done poetry jams in manila back a few years back so seeing a poem written by a Filipina, here in bahrain is really refreshing. I like how you played the idea of ending a relationship with counting of the roundabouts. (correct me if my reading is wrong) The simplicity of the scene, where two people driving, passing the roundabouts of hamadtown and how it reflected the things the both shared or not... plain genius. I wish to read more of your works. God Bless. P.S. is Elham an exclusive group or is it open for creative minds in the general public? Hi Ms. Carmela, (I’m presuming you’re thomasian, I graduated from UST, Faculty of Arts and Letters ):D I’ve read your profile. I stumbled upon this site by chance or not.. I’ve heard about elham for some time now and I was wondering if they cultivate an avenue for poetry and seeing your name and poetry with elham answered my query. I’ve been writing poetry since I was kid, mostly angst poetry, I’ve done poetry jams in manila back a few years back so seeing a poem written by a Filipina, here in bahrain is really refreshing. I like how you played the idea of ending a relationship with counting of the roundabouts. (correct me if my reading is wrong) The simplicity of the scene, where two people driving, passing the roundabouts of hamadtown and how it reflected the things the both shared or not… plain genius. I wish to read more of your works. God Bless. P.S. is Elham an exclusive group or is it open for creative minds in the general public?

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